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PostSubject: what can i do?   what can i do? EmptyWed Jun 17, 2009 7:49 am

what can i do to change how i feel
what can i do to make it go away
what can i do to rid of the pain
and be happy again some day...

what can i do to say the right things
what can i do to make things right
what can i do to make people see
that right now im just not right

all i want is for to be loved
and wanted oh so much
how can i change that feeling of lonliness
when i know i am not good enough

what can i do to make the tears vanish
into smiles and so much happiness
what can i do to make the pain go away
i dont know how to, i try each and every day

I have become distant from so many people
good people i know i love and adore
i have become distant from friends that love me
but i dont know how to change this feeling nomore

i try to put on smiles and pretend to be happy
but inside is dying oh so much
i want so little but yet seems like a lot
and i dont know how to change this feeling i got...

what can i do to make it go away
what can i do to make the happiness stay
what can i do to change this life
into something better before i die?

if you have the answers please tell me now
for im all out of options i want to die somehow
i cant take this feeling no longer thats for sure
its tearing me apart little by little more and more...
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liken

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PostSubject: Re: what can i do?   what can i do? EmptyThu Jul 15, 2010 1:42 pm

You have written great lines..
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PostSubject: Re: what can i do?   what can i do? EmptySat Jul 17, 2010 7:06 am

there are just out standing really written so well they are heart touching lines....i would like to give them music...it must be super combination with these lines....
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